Post by Travis Dawson on Oct 31, 2020 20:20:23 GMT
CHERRY KYSS -vs- LORELEI ADAMS
Cherry Kyss
Cherry Kyss
Match Relevance
(How often did you mention the match, whether in dialogue or in scene?)
[] 1 - little to none
[] 2 - a few mentions
[] 3 - solid
[x] 4 - great
Character Development
(How much character development did you pack into your latest RP?)
[x] 1 - reactionary RP or lacked any character development
[] 2 - fair amount
[] 3 - great amount
[] 4 - great amount, equally balanced with match relevance
Cohesiveness/Flow
(How easy to read was your RP?)
[] 1 - very segmented/hard to follow
[] 2 - good
[x] 3 - well balanced
Selling Results
(Did you mention what happened during the past show/sell any gashes or injuries?)
(Newcomers get an automatic 'bye' / 2 score here)
[] 1 - no
[x] 2 - yes
Grammar
(How was the writer's grammar/punctuation/use of words?)
[] 1 - not the greatest
[] 2 - good
[x] 3 - amazing
Realism
[] 1 - no
[x] 2 - yes
For Championship Matches Only:
Was capturing the title/defending the title a priority for the character?
[] 1 - mentioned very little or not at all
[] 2 - good, could've been better
[] 3 - yes, we can tell it means something to the character
Creativity
(The most important category. Factors may include and are not limited to: making great use of location, being very descriptive, drawing emotion out of the reader whether it be sorrow, comedy, or suspense, finding ways to not only trash talk your opponents but others on the roster, doing your research, bringing up your opponent's past, discussing your character's future in depth as it pertains to both in-ring and what your character has going on outside of the ring, and continuity (because we are all, after all, telling a story.. portions at a time!), incorporating real life current events, etc.)
[] 1 - not the most imaginative
[] 2 - could use improvement
[x] 3 - good
[] 4 - outside the box/unique
[] 5 - great
[] 6 - very impressive
[] 7 - RP of the week caliber
Score out of 25: 18 of 25
Other Comments: Massive improvement over last week's RP. The match relevance was sprinkled all throughout, but besides the promo aspect, there wasn't much in the way of character development and the scene was pretty bland - just walking through an airport. I loved the ending and how it set up for next week's tag match.
Lorelei Adams
N/A
Match Total: 18 of 50
N/A
Match Total: 18 of 50