Post by Travis Dawson on Dec 10, 2020 22:47:00 GMT
ADI GOLD -vs- SEROTONIN
SEROTONIN
Match Relevance
(How often did you mention the match, whether in dialogue or in scene?)
[ ] 1 - little to none
[ ] 2 - a few mentions
[x] 3 - good, or maybe only in 1 segment of the RP
[ ] 4 - solid, scattered throughout the RP
[ ] 5 - great, a solid amount, with high quality
Character Development
(How much character development did you pack into your latest RP? Did we learn anything new about your character?)
[ ] 1 - reactionary RP or lacked any character development at all
[x] 2 - fair amount
[ ] 3 - good amount, equally balanced with match relevance
[ ] 4 - solid, important
[ ] 5 - crucial, we learned something major about the character
Flow
(How smoothly did your RP flow? How easy to read was your RP in terms of flashbacks, character and scene transitions? Was it all over the place or was it a straight-forward read?)
[x] 1 - there really were no transitions, not much going on in the RP
[ ] 2 - hard to follow
[ ] 3 - good
[ ] 4 - solid
[ ] 5 - great
Selling Results
(Did you mention what happened during the past show/sell any gashes or injuries?)
(Newcomers get an automatic 'bye' / 5 score here)
[ ] 1 - no
[ ] 2 - yes, a fair amount
[ ] 3 - good
[ ] 4 - solid job
[x] 5 - great, the character sold injuries, interviews, match outcomes, and maybe even certain moves in which their characters were used or mentioned to productively further stories along
Grammar
(How was the writer's grammar/punctuation/use of words?)
[ ] 1 - do you English, though?
[ ] 2 - fair, not necessarily bad
[ ] 3 - good, maybe still a little hard to read
[ ] 4 - solid, maybe a couple of errors here and there
[x] 5 - great, incredibly easy to read, no huge standout errors
For Championship Matches Only:
(Was capturing the title/defending the title a priority for the character?)
[ ] 1 - mentioned very little or not at all
[ ] 2 - mentioned it, in the context that one is at stake in the match
[ ] 3 - good, could've been better
[ ] 4 - solid
[ ] 5 - great, we can tell it means something to the character
Creativity / Overall Quality
(The most important category. Factors may include and are not limited to: realism, making great use of location, being very descriptive, drawing emotion out of the reader whether it be sorrow, comedy, or suspense, finding ways to not only trash talk your opponents but others on the roster, doing your research, bringing up your opponent's past, discussing your character's future in depth as it pertains to both in-ring and what your character has going on outside of the ring, and continuity (because we are all, after all, telling a story.. portions at a time!), incorporating real life current events, etc.)
[ ] 1 - not the most imaginative
[ ] 2 - could use improvement
[ ] 3 - good
[ ] 4 - better
[ ] 5 - solid
[x] 6 - great, very impressive
[ ] 7 - top 5 RP caliber
[ ] 8 - RP of the week caliber
[ ] 9 - the existence of this RP was crucial, not only for your character but to the fed as well
[ ] 10 - RP of the year caliber, this point is meant to be damn near impossible to achieve
Score out of 35: 22 of 35
Comments: I’m loving this character! It’s like the more I read these RP’s, I’m picking up more on her lingo (hence the ‘5’ score in grammar - the errors are coming from the perspective of the character, folks!). With that being said, there wasn’t much scene wise or character development wise (as far as OUTSIDE of the wrestling industry in concerned), but the RP was very effective in explaining why she’s hating her time here, and why she feels like she’s getting the shaft, using past results to do just that. That paired with the comedy (whether it’s always intentional or not… I literally hear the RP’s being read by Bhad Bhabie in my head each week) seem to be your strong suits for this character! Solid stuff.
MATCH TOTAL: 22 of 70