Post by Travis Dawson on Oct 22, 2020 22:06:13 GMT
MATCH 1
Todrick Tabor vs. Jackson Monroe
Todrick Tabor
Todrick Tabor vs. Jackson Monroe
Todrick Tabor
Match Relevance
(How often did you mention the match, whether in dialogue or in scene?)
[ ] 1 - little to none
[ ] 2 - a few mentions
[x] 3 - solid
[ ] 4 - great
Character Development
(How much character development did you pack into your latest RP?)
[ ] 1 - reactionary RP or lacked any character development
[ ] 2 - fair amount
[ ] 3 - great amount
[x] 4 - great amount, equally balanced with match relevance
Cohesiveness/Flow
(How easy to read was your RP?)
[ ] 1 - very segmented/hard to follow
[x] 2 - good
[ ] 3 - well balanced
Selling Results
(Did you mention what happened during the past show/sell any gashes or injuries?)
(Newcomers get an automatic 'bye' / 2 score here)
[x] 0 - first show
[ ] 1 - no
[ ] 2 - yes
Grammar
(How was the writer's grammar/punctuation/use of words?)
[ ] 1 - not the greatest
[ ] 2 - good
[x] 3 - amazing
Realism
[ ] 1 - no
[x] 2 - yes
For Championship Matches Only:
Was capturing the title/defending the title a priority for the character?
[x] 0 - not applicable
[ ] 1 - mentioned very little or not at all
[ ] 2 - good, could've been better
[ ] 3 - yes, we can tell it means something to the character
Creativity
(The most important category. Factors may include and are not limited to: making great use of location, being very descriptive, drawing emotion out of the reader whether it be sorrow, comedy, or suspense, finding ways to not only trash talk your opponents but others on the roster, doing your research, bringing up your opponent's past, discussing your character's future in depth as it pertains to both in-ring and what your character has going on outside of the ring, and continuity (because we are all, after all, telling a story.. portions at a time!), incorporating real life current events, etc.)
[ ] 1 - not the most imaginative
[ ] 2 - could use improvement
[x] 3 - good
[ ] 4 - outside the box/unique
[ ] 5 - great
[ ] 6 - very impressive
[ ] 7 - RP of the week caliber
Score out of 23 (this week only): 17 of 23
Final thoughts: I loved the character development you packed into this, reminding us of Todrick's gender identity, telling us about his move and giving us an inside look on his brotherly relationship with Samuel Chatman. I would've loved a more imaginative setting for the RP, as they're having breakfast at home and then Todrick is speaking to his fans at the end. You pulled off the face role well, of not completely trashing your opponent and being realistic about it being a challenging debut match.
Jackson Monroe
Match Relevance
(How often did you mention the match, whether in dialogue or in scene?)
[ ] 1 - little to none
[ ] 2 - a few mentions
[ ] 3 - solid
[x] 4 - great
Character Development
(How much character development did you pack into your latest RP?)
[ ] 1 - reactionary RP or lacked any character development
[x] 2 - fair amount
[ ] 3 - great amount
[ ] 4 - great amount, equally balanced with match relevance
Cohesiveness/Flow
(How easy to read was your RP?)
[ ] 1 - very segmented/hard to follow
[ ] 2 - good
[x] 3 - well balanced
Selling Results
(Did you mention what happened during the past show/sell any gashes or injuries?)
(Newcomers get an automatic 'bye' / 2 score here)
[x] 0 - first show
[ ] 1 - no
[ ] 2 - yes
Grammar
(How was the writer's grammar/punctuation/use of words?)
[ ] 1 - not the greatest
[ ] 2 - good
[x] 3 - amazing
Realism
[ ] 1 - no
[x] 2 - yes
For Championship Matches Only:
Was capturing the title/defending the title a priority for the character?
[x] 0 - not applicable
[ ] 1 - mentioned very little or not at all
[ ] 2 - good, could've been better
[ ] 3 - yes, we can tell it means something to the character
Creativity
(The most important category. Factors may include and are not limited to: making great use of location, being very descriptive, drawing emotion out of the reader whether it be sorrow, comedy, or suspense, finding ways to not only trash talk your opponents but others on the roster, doing your research, bringing up your opponent's past, discussing your character's future in depth as it pertains to both in-ring and what your character has going on outside of the ring, and continuity (because we are all, after all, telling a story.. portions at a time!), incorporating real life current events, etc.)
[ ] 1 - not the most imaginative
[ ] 2 - could use improvement
[ ] 3 - good
[ ] 4 - outside the box/unique
[x] 5 - great
[ ] 6 - very impressive
[ ] 7 - RP of the week caliber
Score out of 23 (this week only): 19 of 23
Final thoughts: I loved how the ENTIRE RP was match relevance. Props for the bedtime story idea - it was imaginative, and a very fun way to address your opponent. You still managed to portray Jackson as a villain, while also showcasing that he can still have a little sympathy and compassion for those he respects, and Todrick is someone he respects!
TOTAL FOR THIS MATCH: 36 of 46